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Student sample paras and my suggested improvements

Romeo and Juliet sample paragraphs Plus my suggestions for improvements.

Blindsided by love and lust, Romeo inadvertently contributes to his own tragedy. Knowing that he is playing with fire, Romeo continues to woo Juliet, and they are both forced to make rash decisions to protect their relationship. Romeo’s urge to be a peacemaker unintentionally aggravates Tybalt, ensuing a brawl between Tybalt and Mercutio resulting in the death of both. Xxx TARGETTED ANALYSIS! QUOTE LIT DEVICE/ SYMBOL SHAKESPEARE’S …. On the other hand, Juliet is also seen to contribute to one of the greatest tragedies. Fearlessly, she pulls a gun to her head visiting the Friar, saying that she’d rather kill herself than marry county Paris. QUOTES SYMBOL – reaction to her father’s “minx” comments… It could be said that her youthfulness and determination overshadow her power to think rationally, which triggers the unforeseen set of events.

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