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Example 11: Lord of the flies, the conch

Step 1: How does William Golding introduce Jack and the choir boys? What are they wearing? What is their attitude?

Lord of the flies, p. 26 the conchDownload

Step 2: Give descriptions of the boys.

  • eg. cautious, dazed;

Step 3: Learn new words and phrases: use in a sentence.
Learn four new expressions (words and phrases).   Write these phrases in your own sentence.

  • In the haze they notice “something dark was fumbling along”; to use hands clumsily
  • “They laughed at such cheery duplication” ; exactly like or corresponding to something else
  • “The boy vaulted onto the platform”; to spring over
  • “The intentness of his gaze”;  attentively occupied
  • “They were dressed in eccentric clothing”; odd appearance.“
  • They were incredulous”; showing disbelief
  • “Complexions of newly washed plums”: appearance of the skin colour

Step 4: Analyse the author’s narrative devices: notice the symbolism of the play of light and darkness throughout to foreshadow Jack’s descent into darkness. When he confronts Ralph, Golding notes that he is affected by “sun-blindness”.   This foreshadows his inability to remain clear – especially from a moral perspective.

Note the description of the choir boys: they are dressed, at first, immaculately. Their clothes are a symbol of proper, clean, orderly, civilised boys who seem to be following the rules and obeying Jack’s commands.  The walk in “two parallel lines” – suggesting order.  They wear black caps and black cloaks: they are the first to turn to hunting.  As the leader, Jack stands out. He wears a “golden badge” . Their “complexion of a newly washed plum” (a metaphor) draws attention to their freshness.

Other Exercises

  • Exercise 13: Lord of the Flies, the twins
  • Exercise 14: Lord of the Flies, the hunters
  • Exercise 15: Lord of the flies: Simon
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