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Word building extension: Exercise 22 p 33

Exercise 22, p. 33, Should alcohol be banned?

  • Use the tone words on p. 66-67 to describe and identify the author’s attitude, and approach to the issue.
  • Identify clearly what the author says.
  • Identify how the author says it (what is their attitude)
  • Include appropriate quotes in the sentence

Mr Marcus Turrini

  1. Adopting a sensible tone, Mr Turrini recommends the ban on alcohol which he believes benefits parents and players.
  2. Taking a considered approach, Mr Turrini  believes that the clubs must place greater emphasis on their reputations.
  3. From a practical perspective, Mr Turrini  advises clubs to become “smarter”.

Ms Goldsmith

  1. Adopting a solicitous (caring and concerned) tone, Ms Mary Goldsmith, a parent of a young footballer, also recommends (approves of) the ban.
  2. Ms Goldsmith uses an indignant tone to criticise/isolate the “yobbos” and “louts” who are disrupting the game.
  3. She is incensed that bottles were “thrown at the match”.

Mr Abe Scott

  1. Adopting an authoritative tone, Mr Scott recommends that the parents should set a good example and role model responsible behaviour.
  2. Mr Scott assertively maintains that “school kids should not be exposed to drunken loutish behaviour”
  3. Using a dogmatic tone, he advises all members of the football club that “alcohol and sport do not mix”.
  4. From a moral/upstanding/high-minded perspective, he also expects that all children will learn to behave in “socially responsible ways”.

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