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Sentence patterns: wide-branching sentences

When analysing the author’s words and strategies, it is important to be clear and concise. Avoid lengthy sentences with numerous clauses. Try to stick to two clauses.

Reasoning strategies; p. 10.
The (introductory) anecdotal reference to […] highlights the […]. It reflects Ms S’s view that […]
The statistical data relating to the disproportionate number of young adults in car accidents highlights the need for […]
Ms T. bolsters her argument by referring to the findings of the survey that show a link between […]
The author relies on his/her professional/personal experience to prove that […]
The eye-witness accounts clearly support the author’s view that […]
The inclusion of Mr Smith’s studied comments about […] lend credibility to the view that […]
Readers are likely to be impressed by the professional reference to […] which clearly shows a relationship between […]

Comparisons, p. 11.
Adopting a candid tone, Ms Wong reflects upon her parents’ background to highlight similarities between […]. The implication is that […].
Ms Wong’s insightful comparison between the US Supreme Court rules and J.C. Watson’s comments draw attention to […]
Ms Penny Wong juxtaposes the ban on interracial marriages with the restrictions on same sex marriage to focus the reader’s attention on […].
Ms Wong relies on her personal background to show a relationship between […] Accordingly, readers are inclined to […]

Characterisation, p. 12
The editor’s portrayal of children as the victims of Mr Pallant’s cruel agenda is designed to […]
The editor portrays Mr Pallant as a ruthless and corrupt cyberbully who […]. Concerned parents are likely to […].
The editor channels the reader’s indignation towards cyberbullies such as Mr Pallant who are depicted as […].
Emotive words referring to […] reinforce the editor’s image of the culprit as […].

Portrayal of opponents, p. 13
Adopting a/an […] tone, Mr Krisanski reproaches parents whose children lack […].
The author stridently discredits parents who pander to their children, because of […].
By censuring parents who […], the author anticipates a/an […] reaction among readers.
Colloquial (sarcastic/figurative) references to […] reflect the author’s criticism of parents.
They imply that […].

Appeals and impact, p. 14
Ms Smith prioritises health concerns and encourages teenagers to think about […].
The author’s appeal to health and wellbeing highlights to teenagers the dangers of […].
Ms Smith relies on both statistical data and her own candid real-life observation to highlight what she believes is an obvious link between […].
The author’s appeals to […] are likely to earn the trust of her concerned audience.

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