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The author’s tone seems more sympathetic and emanates a genuine concern for American citizens as he explores their helpless state. He urges the reader to empathise with those who are to choose between the ‘eye of the newt and toe of the ’. The infamous recipe for spell casting continues the extended metaphor of Macbeth whilst reinforcing that American political system lacks transparency, reliability or responsibility of a modern republic, similar to the dark forces symbolised through the witches. Its state which vaguely reminds us of the Shakespearean times and the time period after the tragic Civil War raise outright alarm in the reader. Fortifying public sceptics he pragmatically concludes that only the presidency of a noble figure such as Roosevelt could change the fate of the country as it did in 1901, confirm the public sceptics about the future of United States.