Prompt: Belonging to a group is essential to one’s sense of self
FIRST PARAGRAPH: (Negative) Concept ; topic sentence: Those who are unable to find a place to belong in society frequently suffer from low self esteem and self doubts.
- Increase in self doubts
- Lack of confidence
- Feeling of being dissatisfied
- Increase in anti-social behaviour
Examples: Kayne/ Tiffany Hall/ Connor/ Arie Eddy / Hannah Smith (psychologist’s Danah Boyd’s comments about pain, help and suffering)
For example, the more Connor withdraws into his online life, the more introverted and depressed he becomes. He reveals a great deal of anti-social behaviour: he hides himself in the cupboard, plays truant and eats alone in his room. (Include quotes from the experts.)
Include quotes, include an analysis which links the quote to the topic – feelings of distrust, hatred, worthlessness, inferiority, leads to anxiety and depression.
SECOND PARAGRAPH: (Positive) Contrastingly, if individuals find a supportive and positive way to belong to groups in society, then they will more likely be personally fulfilled and happier.. able to contribute in a positive way.
- Increase in self esteem and confidence
- Happiness and feeling of fulfilment
Kayne’s story with his foster family; Nick Jones; Connor
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