P. 23: Write two paragraphs based on the views of these stakeholders
Topic sentence: School photos should not be “airbrushed” because parents must love their children unconditionally and resist from placing undue emphasis on appearance.
Or Topic sentence: Photographic companies must not alter or “airbrush” school photos because any changes tend to encourage children to over-emphasise their appearance.
- Include a reference to an “expert” and a real-life example of Monica. (expand) Monica is a typical child who appears to be embarrassed by her freckles.
Or Topic Sentence/Rebuttal: Some stakeholders, including concerned teachers, defend such alterations on the basis that students may not be following school rules.
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