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  • ‘The language of division and exclusion is more prevalent in online spaces.’ To what extent is this true?
  • “Messaging Culture”: Agnes Callard, Waleed Aly and Jayne Hrdlicka Virgin
  • “National” identity: tenor, social values, social cohesion; diversity and “one and free”: Australia Day Speeches
  • “Rear Window” : a film by Alfred Hitchcock: “Rear-window ethics” by Dr Jennifer Minter
  • “Revolt against revolting web content is working”
  • “Strine”: Aussie (non-standard) English ; our “mateship” narrative: the use of the vernacular and social values
  • “Taboo” language examples (2020)
  • “The thing around your neck” by Chimamanda Adichie
  • “The Thing around your Neck” in C.N. Adichie’s anthology
  • “The Whirlpool” by Cate Kennedy
  • “Some Schools fail the test”, Exercise 33, p. 79
  • “The Beat of a Different Drum” by Simon Tong
  • (2020) Linguistic features and official documents; relating to COVID-19
  • (Green) Exercise 14: Get a barn, p. 20
  • (Green) Exercise 15, At your discretion
  • (Green) Exercise 16, Community News, p. 23
  • (Green) Exercise 19, p. 32 Child weekly (Ms Crossway)
  • (Green) Exercise 24, Fashion Fun, pp 42-3
  • (Green) Exercise 27, Shine Editor: One punch too many
  • (Green) Exercises 19 and 20
  • (Green) Give Cyclists a Break, Ex 26, p. 40
  • (Green) Lesson 5: Exercise 22 p 36
  • (Green) Reasons: exercise 18, p. 28
  • (Green) Reasons: Exercise 20, p 31
  • (Green) Toeing the line and Taxing sugar products
  • (Green): Exercise 17, p. 27
  • (Orange) Argument & Techniques Program
  • (Orange) Arguments 2020: Arguments and Persuasive Language: analysing and presenting opinion-based texts (sample pages)
  • (Orange) Arguments and Persuasive Language
  • (Orange) Exercise 1, p. 8. Articles on argument structure
  • (Orange) Exercise 22, Comparative paragraphs
  • (Orange) Exercise 22, Student’s response and comments
  • (Orange) Exercise 22, Time to put a foot down
  • (Orange) Exercise 31, Free Speech Matters, p. 74
  • (Orange) Exercise 34, Seashells p. 79
  • (Orange) Extension activity: two similar key ideas, Ex 29
  • (Orange) paragraphs: Exercise 11: 42-43
  • (Orange) Text 27: Skinning the cat in more ways than one
  • (Orange) Texts 8 and 32: police body cameras
  • (Orange) Turn to Exercise 22, pp. 62-63
  • (Orange) Workbook Arguments, p 70, Ex 29
  • (Red) Exercise 32, Outright bans, p. 43
  • (Red) Exercise 40, Nosing Around
  • (Red) On the attack: Exercises 28-32
  • (Red) Persuasive Language: Extension Exercises
  • (Red) Revision: Letters re euthanasia laws, p. 65
  • (Red) Turn to Exercise 19 p. 30
  • (Yellow) Chapter 2: Exercise 10, p. 31
  • (Yellow) Chapter 2: Exercise 6, p. 24
  • (Yellow) Chapter 2: Exercise 8, p. 28
  • (Yellow) Chapter 2: Exercise 9, p. 30
  • (Yellow) Chapter 2: Reasoning
  • (Yellow) Exercise 2, Essay: Child beauty pageants, p. 34
  • (Yellow) Exercise 25, Attack, p. 63
  • (Yellow) Exercise 28, p. 67
  • (Yellow) Exercise 29, Rate rise for junk food outlets, p. 68
  • 1 popup survey test
  • 12 Angry Men: R Rose, Quotes
  • 12 Angry Men: Rose’s views and values
  • 12 Angry Men: Sample essays (justice/jurors)
  • 1984 and Stasiland
  • 1984 Examples
  • 1984: some easy-to-follow notes
  • 1984: some typical essays
  • 1998 Boyer Lecture: we shape the landscape
  • 2009 VCA English Language Exam: Got the message
  • 2014 English Language Exam commentary Quick Fix
  • 2017 VCE Exam: Tim Minchin’s acceptance speech – logie awards (2024-2028 Study Design)
  • 2023 Argument Analysis: Persuasive Language sessions via Zoom
  • 2023 New Study Design: “purpose”, key ideas and depth
  • 2023 Sessions for Year 12: (in person and via zoom) specific texts and argument analysis classes
  • 2023 Study Design Crafting pieces
  • 2023 Summer Poems W B Yeats Wild Swans
  • 2023 Summer Break excerpts
  • 2023 Summer Break Writing Tips: Literary Excerpts
  • 2023 Summer Class poems Sylvia Plath Morning Song
  • 2023 Summer classes, excerpts and poems Adrienne Rich Aunt Jennifer’s Tigers
  • 2023 VCE Foundation Program
  • 2025 VCE Preparation Classes
  • A (hybrid) essay: Wag the Dog (middle notes)
  • A (hybrid) expository essay : Whose Reality /Wag the Dog
  • A Checklist of an author’s key ideas, views, values, message
  • A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens
  • A Christmas Dinner by Charles Dickens
  • A clash of ideology, Kirsty Mendelson
  • A fully objective view of reality?
  • A Head start (years 7-8-9)
  • A person with a disability (Jayden Evans: Love on the Spectrum/ Q&A)
  • A persuasive essay: sugar tax
  • A sample plan/essay : how does Rose show his approval of the jury system
  • A Separation (film) (conflict)
  • A series of “open” letters (based on The Lot)
  • A series of essay plans for No Sugar
  • A spoken conversation: informal text: 2005 Exam
  • A student’s response and comments, Exercise 28 p. 72.
  • A tradesperson: (social) identity: plumber/electrician (jargon and “strine”)
  • A variety of essay topics
  • A world of illusions (Speech : Sally Dalton, youth and wellbeing consultant)
  • A+ reading, writing, essay-writing resources
  • Aboriginal English: First Nations cultural identity
  • Aboriginal English: English Language
  • Aboriginal English: identities; Tasman Keith 2021 Dreaming Award
  • Aboriginal English: overt prestige and identity markers (NITV)
  • Aboriginal Englishes: unique, diverse, ancient and evolving – numerous examples and quotes
  • About Us
  • Ageist Attitudes; social attitudes and change; the WHO report and Life Matters
  • All about Eve: build a para around views and values
  • All About Eve: views, values and critical scenes
  • An analysis of the rooster coop
  • An Anthology: Australian Literary Landscapes : The Face in the Mirror (Blossom Beeby), p. 59
  • An Australian Anthology: a literary landscape: Poems of the Dreamtime, p. 4
  • An Australian Anthology: a literary snapshot: The Drover’s Wife by Henry Lawson, p. 20
  • An Australian Anthology: a snapshot of literary landscapes
  • An Australian Anthology: a snapshot of literary landscapes, : The Happiest Refugee, Anh Do, p. 66-67
  • An Australian Anthology: a snapshot of literary landscapes, Baked Beans and Burnt Toast p. 55
  • An Australian Anthology: a snapshot of literary landscapes: “Chinese Dancing, Bendigo Style” by Joo-Inn Chew, p. 48
  • An essay : how language reflects changing social attitudes
  • An expert: Exercises 41 and 42
  • An in-built (male/white) default position (the in-group)
  • An Individual’s use of language is shaped by social attitudes.
  • An understanding of Standard Australian English is needed to be able to communicate in all contexts in contemporary Australian society. To what extent is this true?
  • Analysing Argument: Year 12
  • Analysing Arguments (opinion-based texts/tasks)
  • Analysing Arguments: perfect practice for VCE
  • Analysing opinion-based persuasive texts
  • Analytical and text-response skills
  • Analytical commentary: English Language structure
  • Animal Farm
  • Animal Farm notes
  • Animal Farm: Napoleon’s brutal tactics
  • Area Study 1: Informal Language
  • Area Study 2: Formal Language
  • Argument Analysis 2020: Newly published workbook: Arguments and Persuasive Language: analysing and presenting your own opinion-based texts
  • Arguments 2020: Arguments and Persuasive Language
  • Arguments and Language Analysis
  • Arguments and Language: Tips, Question and Answer
  • Arguments and Persuasive Language
  • Arguments and Persuasive Language (VCE): Membership Page
  • Arguments and persuasive language: 2024-2027 VCE Study Design
  • Arguments and Techniques
  • Arguments, p. 66, Dr Sue Johnson
  • Arguments, persuasive techniques, good quality writing, grammatically correct sentences, polished expression, sophisticated structure.
  • Arguments/techniques analytical skills
  • Asher Learmonth, a Cranbookian, speech to his Year 12 cohort, re sexist language and behaviour
  • Aspects of Australian English and national identity
  • AUKUS Submarine deal: SAE, jargon, doublespeak: Minister’s double speak 2024
  • Aussie English: our differences (Lenie Johanson)
  • Aussie identity: the “mateship” narrative and numerous examples
  • Aussie Slang and the changing pace of strine
  • Australian Anthology: Selected Epistles by Olivia Muscat, p. 77
  • Australian Literary Landscapes
  • Australian Slang and OZ English
  • Australian vernacular, strine, change and identity markers
  • Become an expert: the passive
  • Before and After Student Examples
  • Better Essays & Persuasive Techniques
  • Better Essays and Persuasive Techniques
  • Better Essays Exercise 30 Student Response
  • Better Essays Page
  • Better Essays: a list of persuasive essays
  • Better Essays: Chapter Outline
  • Billy Wilder’s Sunset Boulevard
  • Blended Overt and covert Professional Identities: singer song-writer Katie Noonan
  • Blog
    • Language Analysis Resources Years 11 -12
  • Books
  • Brooklyn by Colm Toibin
  • Burial Rites, Hannah Kent
  • Burial Rites, Hannah Kent’s intentions
  • Calling it out: Scrabble, Mattel, the ‘Unmute” campaign; Christine Holgate ex CEO
  • Cart
  • Cat’s Eye by Margaret Atwood
  • Catcher in the Rye
  • Cate Campbell Speech to Fina Summary, Round up and Further Learning
  • Cell One in The Thing Around Your Neck by C.N. Adichie
  • Chanel Contos, online petition; sexist language and assault
  • Change to Universities, by Dr Chuck Slater (Exercise 26)
  • Chapter 1: Extra activities
  • Chapter 2, Exercise 11 Pocket Money
  • Chapter 2, Exercise 13, p. 35
  • Chapter 2, p. 23 (Loony Idea)
  • Chapter 2: Exercise 1, p. 23
  • Chapter 2: Exercise 11, p. 33
  • Chapter 2: Exercise 12, p. 34
  • Chapter 2: Exercise 15, p. 41
  • Chapter 2: extra activities
  • Chapter 3, Exercise 21, Animal Testing
  • Chapter 3, Exercise 25, p. 63
  • Chapter 3, Exercise 26, p. 64
  • Chapter 3, Exercise 31, p. 74
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 17, p. 45
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 20, p. 52
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 21 p. 57
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 22, p. 58
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 23 (further)
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 23, p. 59
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 26, p. 64
  • Chapter 3: Exercise 30, pp 73-4
  • Chapter 3: extra activities
  • Chapter 3: Persuasive strategies (Ex 18-29)
  • Chapter 4, Vaccinations, p. 84
  • Chapter 4: Different Persuasive Text Types
  • Chapter 4: Exercise 33, p. 79
  • Chapter 4: Exercise 37 Vaccinations
  • Chapter 4: Persuasive Text Types
  • Character-based stories
  • Characterisation (7 – 10)
  • Characteristics of Spoken Informal Language: summary
  • Characters, Ideas, Connor and Kayne
  • Charlie’s Country (and comparative essays with Tracks) (Book Pairs)
  • Checkout
  • Christopher’s limitations and his strengths
  • Class Saturday 24th February New Words
  • Class tasks and focus: Sunday 10.45 to 11.45
  • Class Tasks VCE Prep: 3rd February:
  • Class tasks: VCE prep (Saturday 10.15)
  • Clear language, analogies, face needs; letter writers; discourse features
  • Clear writing, plain English and plain language
  • Close passage analysis
  • Close Passage Analysis
  • Cloudstreet paragraphs on characters/themes
  • Cohesion and coherence: summary
  • Cold Snap by Cate Kennedy
  • Commentary : an effective structure
  • Commentary of Prime Minister’s Australia Day Speech 2024 (Study Design 2024-2028)
  • Commentary practice
  • Commentary: VCAA English Language 2006: Water Board
  • Comparative paragraphs: student samples based on power
  • Comparing justice and the abuse of power in several texts
  • Conflict – deeper ideas; ambivalence and contradictions
  • Conflict and Every Man (Stack)
  • Conflict of ideas; progress and change
  • Constructed realities: dictators and governments
  • Contact us
  • Contemporary Examples of Doublespeak (Formal/Corporate)
  • Contemporary language examples: face needs and “double speak” and slogans
  • Contemporary linguistic examples – 2024
  • Control of Paragraph: Step 1 – 3: Ms Smith (56) Leunig’s mummy cartoon
  • Cosi by Louis Nowra (Notes by English Works)
  • Courses
  • Covert, non-standard Australian English: linguistic features reflect social and cultural identity codes: sports people
  • Creating Texts: Writing About Personal Journeys
  • Creative sample: pets as an allegory
  • Creative Sketch : Mrs Dubose
  • Creative strategies used by authors
  • Creative writing tasks
  • Crucible and Dressmaker (Home page)
  • Crucible and Year of Wonders
  • Crucible and Year of Wonders – shared ideas (topic sentences)
  • Crucible and Year of Wonders: Summary quotes and notes
  • Crucible Quotes
  • Crucible: dilemmas and choices
  • Crucible/Dressmaker class
  • Customised Year-level Workbook (specific texts): one-stop shop
  • David Crystal on “punctuating the internet”
  • David Crystal on Language Change
  • David Crystal on punctuation and “pragmatic tolerance”
  • Death of a salesman
  • Defamation laws, the ABC and Nine network against Chau Chak Wing
  • Desire and illusion in Death of a Salesman
  • Different aspects of reality: soldiers at war
  • Different versions of reality
  • Dinky Di Aussie Bloke
  • Does political correctness unite us or divide us?Political correctness, social gaffes and language change (formal language)
  • Don Watson and Watsonia
  • Dorothy Hewett’s This Old Man Comes Rolling Home (1976)
  • Double speak and dysphemisms
  • Doublespeak and George Orwell
  • Dr Jenny’s 10.30 class: new venue; best possible preparation for Year 12
  • Dr Jenny’s 2.30 class: VCE preparation
  • Dr Jenny’s classes: regroup; reading; writing; expressing, evaluating and thinking.
  • Dr Jenny’s January Holiday Sessions
  • Dr Jenny’s lessons (2024)
  • Dr Jenny’s targeted workshops (2022)
  • Dragging their feet: p. 6 and 31
  • Drug testing defies logic, by Mr Jim Shanahan
  • Drug tests for welfare recipients
  • Dylan Alcott Australian of the Year 2022
  • EAL: Persuasive techniques
  • Eats, Shoots and Leaves by Lynne Truss
  • Edgar Allen Poe and “tales of mystery and imagination”
  • Encountering Conflict
  • English and essay-writing skills: middle years: Lessons, tasks and homework page
  • English Extension Activities
  • English Language Essays
  • English Language Examples for Essays: linguistic analysis
  • English Language Examples: Formal and Informal Language
  • English Language Membership Program
  • English Language Resources
  • English Language Resources 2016
  • English Language Resources 2021: The benefits of our Membership Program
  • English Skills for Naplan, Scholarship and VCE
  • English Works Analytical Vocab Builder
  • English Works classes
  • English Works Classes 2021 with Dr Jenny
  • English Works Classic Short Stories by the masters
  • English Works Extension Program
  • English Works Reader Blue Book
  • English Works Short Classics Anthology Home Page
  • English Works Short Classics Anthology: A Blind Man in the Street by C J Dennis
  • English Works Short Classics Anthology: The Tables Turned
  • English Works Spell Check
  • Essay 1: Formal language is mainly used to clarify meaning, but it can also be used to obfuscate.
  • Essay 1: Social identity is constructed primarily through language. Discuss referring to at least two subsystems.
  • Essay 1: The nature of digital communication, for better or worse, is changing the way we use the English Language.
  • Essay 10: social attitudes towards taboo language and swearing
  • Essay 11: formal language favours those in positions of power and influence. Discuss.
  • Essay 2: Contemporary Australians use a number of overt and covert language norms to construct their identity. (Also: Our linguistic repertoires can be used to exploit overt and covert norms, helping achieve our aspirations.’ (2022)
  • Essay 2: The language choices we make reflect who we are and the social groups to which we belong.
  • Essay 3: Freedom of speech is a double-edged sword
  • Essay 4: Discuss the role of covert linguistic practices in establishing group solidarity.
  • Essay 4: Formal language can both promote and prevent social harmony. To what extent do you agree?
  • Essay 5: How have changing social attitudes influenced language use in Australia. Discuss.
  • Essay 6: “All euphemistic language, including doublespeak, is at heart a lie to conceal truth and as such, should play no part in effective communication”. Discuss, referring to at least two subsystems in your response.
  • Essay 8: Language is a tool for building but it is also a weapon – it depends on the user. Discuss.
  • Essay 9: Language is a powerful tool that influences social attitudes. ‘In contemporary Australian society, we must be careful with our use of language in public contexts.’ (2021)
  • Essay based on Growing Up Asian in Australia
  • Essay on language change
  • Essay on Tenor:  ‘Without a doubt, the tenor of a conversation has the most influence on the politeness strategies of the participants.’
  • Essay plan: a simple straightforward structure
  • Essay Prompt: The evolving nature of our language largely reflects the influence other cultures have on the way we communicate.’ (2022) To what extent is this true in contemporary Australian society? Refer to at least two subsystems of language in your response
  • Essay prompt: ‘How does language variation contribute to the development of a sense of identity?’ Discuss with relation to contemporary Australian society. Refer to at least two subsystems in your response.
  • Essay Prompt: ‘The language of division and exclusion is more prevalent in online spaces.’ To what extent is this true?
  • Essay prompt: How do evolving language features reflect the varying individual identities?
  • Essay prompts on national identity
  • Essay Revision Tasks: Exercise 36, p. 87
  • Essay Samples
  • Essay writing and Grammar
  • Essay-writing notes for General Achievement Test
  • Essay: english language reflects our identity
  • Essay: language reflects the identity of youth (national identity etc.)
  • Essay: Public language include and exclude
  • Essay: Slang plays an important role in establishing individual and group identities. Discuss. 
  • Essay: Standard Australian English is the most prestigious in Australian society.
  • Essay: the role of informal language
  • Essay: Users must negotiate positive and negative face needs when communicating successfully
  • Essays about film-watching: Rear Window (Dr Jenny)
  • Essays and language change
  • Essays and quotes on Language Change
  • Essays for English Language: comments from linguists and social and political commentators
  • Essays Made Easy for English Language (VCE Units 3-4)
  • Essays Revision Exercise: 35, p. 84
  • Essays: Exercise 1, p. 6
  • Ethnolects and Ethnic non-standard varieties of Australian English
  • Euphemisms and face-saving terms
  • Euphemisms: double speak and misleading terms
  • Evading reality (personal experience)
  • EW Short Classics Anthology: Excerpt from Tom Sawyer, p 22
  • EW Short Classics Mending Wall Robert Frost
  • EW Short Classics: Trying to Please
  • Exam Revision Section : summaries etc
  • Exam tips: writing your commentary
  • Example 1 On-site pill tests : a reality check
  • Example 11: Lord of the flies, the conch
  • Example 12: Lord of the flies, the twins
  • Example 13, Lord of the flies, the hunters
  • Example 14, Lord of the flies, Simon
  • Example 4, Exercise 4, Sugar additives leave a sour taste
  • Example analysis from Two Of Us
  • Examples of Aboriginal English
  • Examples of Language Change
  • Examples of spoken discourse (informal characteristics – non-fluency features)
  • Examples of the “true blue” Aussie: a national icon?
  • Exclusive (sexist) language 2016
  • Exercise 1: Jason’s Speech (Medea)
  • Exercise 10, Dr Johnson, p. 40
  • Exercise 10, p. 40: student responses
  • Exercise 10: Animal Farm: the hen’s rebellion
  • Exercise 11, p. 22 “Monkey see, monkey do!
  • Exercise 12, Green Workbook Program, Naplan test, p. 16
  • Exercise 13
  • Exercise 13, Bring back the strap, p. 45
  • Exercise 13, Bring Back the Strap, pp. 44
  • Exercise 13, pp. 44-45
  • Exercise 14, “Get a barn”, p 20
  • Exercise 14, Ban Mobile Phones in cars, p. 38
  • Exercise 14, Destroying ancient songlines, p. 19 (Green workbook)
  • Exercise 15, Mr Pete Spark, p. 47
  • Exercise 15, p. 22 (Green/advanced)
  • Exercise 15, Students @ Spencer pp 47-8
  • Exercise 15, The student debt crisis, p. 46
  • Exercise 15, Trigger alerts, Ms Tina Hagen p. 47
  • Exercise 15, Ungrateful students, p. 46
  • Exercise 15: A ban on smacking, pp 40-41
  • Exercise 15: Medea’s reasons
  • Exercise 16, A later start time at secondary school?, p. 42
  • Exercise 16, Braids and uniforms, p. 27
  • Exercise 16, Vaccinations, p. 23 Metalanguage
  • Exercise 17, p. 51 (Orange)
  • Exercise 17, No Jab No Play, p. 23
  • Exercise 17, p. 29, Easy targets for thieves
  • Exercise 17, p. 29. Working your sentences, p. 85
  • Exercise 17, pg 51 (Orange workbook)
  • Exercise 18 and 19: Brain injury awareness week (p. 46)
  • Exercise 2: Simon Tong’s experiences
  • Exercise 21, p. 32 “Toe the Line” (Green/Orange)
  • Exercise 22, p. 36 Sport Talk
  • Exercise 23, p. 59 (Better Essays
  • Exercise 24, Swings and Playgrounds, p. 60
  • Exercise 25, p. 63: Extension
  • Exercise 26: Ungrateful students
  • Exercise 27: Editorial : Fat tax.
  • Exercise 28, Seashells, Ms Achton
  • Exercise 28: Aim for an impact
  • Exercise 29, p. 71 (Orange workbook)
  • Exercise 3 : Animal Farm Major’s speech
  • Exercise 3 and 4, Helmets for youngsters, p. 12
  • Exercise 31, p. 56 Nightmare they Deserve
  • Exercise 33: Anna’s mother begs for change
  • Exercise 34, Animal Testing
  • Exercise 34: Animal Testing
  • Exercise 36, p. 87 The Plastic Bag Problem
  • Exercise 37, p. 50: Yes Big Brother is watching you
  • Exercise 37: Big Brother and Computer games
  • Exercise 37: Why you should be worried, p. 50
  • Exercise 39, p. 69 Camelcide
  • Exercise 4, analysing arguments
  • Exercise 4: I’m Not Scared
  • Exercise 42: HT Bank by Jonathon Tigfield
  • Exercise 43, Equality rules the day
  • Exercise 5, Safe Schools, p. 13
  • Exercise 5: 12 Angry Men 3rd and 10th Jurors
  • Exercise 6: Medea, Medea’s speech
  • Exercise 7, Puppy factories, p. 10
  • Exercise 7: A need to rethink recycling: a problem with a solution (p. 11)
  • Exercise 7: Animal Farm/Napoleon’s comments
  • Exercise 8, Legalising cannibas for good reasons, p.17
  • Exercise 8, P-plate restrictions: p. 28
  • Exercise 8: 12 Angry Men, the 8th juror
  • Exercise 9 : Blossom Beeby Growing Up Asian
  • Exercise 9, analysing arguments: on public transport
  • Exercise 9, Example 1: Wind farms
  • Exercises 8-9, p. 12, Green Workbook
  • Expert: now “turn to” exercises
  • Exploring Nature: themes and key ideas in Wordsworth’s poems
  • Extended Task: Sentences and Structure (2014 Exam)
  • Extension activities : Exercise 7
  • Extension Classes Sunday 2 September
  • Extension Level 1 (Yrs 8-9)
  • Extension Level 2 (VCE preparation)
  • Extra exercises: Red Workbook tasks
  • Extra notes for No Sugar
  • Face needs: National Identity: The language regarding the Voice: draws together and divides
  • Face needs: politeness factors and social harmony
  • Factors affecting language change: New words: dictionaries
  • Factors driving language change
  • Factors that inhibit a fair trial 12 Angry Men
  • Family Life, Diem Vo
  • FAQs
  • FAQs for students
  • Favourite parallels for Death of a Salesman
  • Film metalanguage: writing on a film
  • Films
  • First Nations : linguistic features from key poems
  • First Nations people, Cape York Noel Pearson, lawyer, legal reformer, land rights activist, academic
  • First Nations People; Mitch Tambo and Patty Mills
  • First Nations people: Cultural and Social identity Rangers “In country”
  • First Pitch for Kids, First Pivot: VCAA 2022, Commentary Text B (Study Design 2024-2028)
  • Five Ways to Disappoint your Mother, Diana Nguyen
  • Fly Away Peter (Malouf)
  • Foe: writing and difference
  • For Blackburn HS Year 12 Students
  • For Parents
  • For Students
  • For Teachers
  • Formal / Public Language and Essays and quotes
  • Formal and informal language
  • Formal and Public language examples (2024)
  • Formal features: Government Press Releases; Official websites and decrees:
  • Formal Language
  • Formal language and jargon; language variation, and group identity
  • Formal language overview and linguistic examples
  • Formal language used to clarify: NewsCorp and workplace and doublespeak and Mr Morrison
  • Formal language; reinforcing authority; leadership and prestige/ Orwell and Napoleon
  • Formal language: linguistic features; clarity; jargon etc. and the Travel Voucher Scheme
  • Formal language: social purpose (positive face needs) and politeness conventions and mechanisms
  • Formal Speeches (2022): the Prime Minister and the Governor General
  • Formal/public language essays
  • Framing our realities
  • Frankenstein: who is to blame?
  • Freedom of Speech and Charlie Hebdo notes/analysis
  • Freedom of Speech, Political Correctness, taboos
  • Freedom of Speech: Gillian Triggs (Speaking Up)
  • Frequently Asked Questions
  • Function, intent and purpose (Study Design 2024-2028, Roman Jakobson)
  • Galileo: best parallels
  • Gattaca
  • Genderlects: diverse identities: language, pronouns and profiles;
  • Generals Die In Bed (Charles Harrison)
  • Geoffrey Robertson – Putin’s war in Ukraine
  • George Orwell and David Crystal: Doublespeak
  • George Orwell: “Why I Write”: public language and double speak
  • Glossary of Metalanguage
  • Glossary of terms for spoken informal discourse
  • Government Style Guide: SAE and Formal Language: accessibility and inclusivity
  • Grammar Support
  • Grammar Tasks (7 – 10)
  • Green Workbook, p. 35, Exercise 22: Sport Talk
  • Green Workbook: “A need to re-think recycling: a problem with a solution”, (Exercise 7, p. 11, Green Workbook)
  • Green workbook: (7) the author’s words, pp 37-47
  • Group Identity: female sportspeople
  • Group identity: sporting clubs and membership (Richmond Football Club)
  • Growing Up Asian: identity and difference
  • Gwen Harwood; poems and themes, commentaries and essays, poetic terminology and quotes
  • Hands-free parenting: a form of child abuse, p. 34
  • Harmony Week 2024: Australia is a multicultural success story; national identity; tenor; face needs
  • Hate speech acts: positive face needs and social values
  • Hate speech and hate conduct: rallies and comments: Eddie Betts, racial slurs; neo Nazis
  • Having a sense of difference- The Mind of a Thief (Patti Miller)
  • Head Start Classes (Years 6-7-8)
  • home
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